User:Mdivestea/Southwest, Syracuse/SPark0141 Peer Review

General info
JJ415, Mdivestea
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 * User:Mdivestea/Southwest, Syracuse
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 * Southwest, Syracuse

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think the lead could touch on more of the topics, such as recreation and a little more of the demographics. The information in the Geography and Demographics section looks great and up-to-date, but the line about affordable housing in the (to be deleted) Demographics section probably should be cited in some way or supported with a comparison of prices. Also, when talking about the quotes from the article in the food insecurity section, I think it would be more effective to actually add quotes from the civilian interviews.

Overall, the article is looking really good! A lot of the information is cited well, and it adds new information to the existing article. If you could find more information about community-based organizations to kind of fill out that section, that also might be good.