User:Mdmkd2/Steatopygia/ValTis5 Peer Review

General info
Mdmkd2
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mdmkd2/Steatopygia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Steatopygia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think it is very informative although I think that it does seem a little to persuasive. I think to be able to improve the article there could be some change in wordage in the last sentence and the first part. For example this part, "These beliefs were validated by the majority and were so popular" I feel like I know what you are saying I just think it feels as if you are imposing opinio. Although I love that you use multiple sources!