User:Meadowsadeh382004/Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology/Dyaffa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meadowsadeh382004


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Meadowsadeh382004/Manus_x_Machina%3A_Fashion_in_an_Age_of_Technology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
For starters, I really like how you listed out what needs more work, making it easy for me to see what your thought process is for the continuation of the editing of this article. From what you have edited, I see how it relates back to the general topic of which you are talking about. However, one thing that confused me was the amount of edits that you had added to the overall paper, perhaps I missed a few, but I was unsure of the amount of changed you have made from the original copy of the article. There are a lot of great ideas in your edits and I can't wait to see how the final project turns out!