User:Meadowsadeh382004/Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology/Tyswitzer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meadow Sadeh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Meadowsadeh382004/Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology
 * Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology

Evaluate the drafted changes
After reviewing both the current article and the sandbox draft, it seems like the section you added relates to the overall topic of Manus x Machina: fashion in an age of technology. I believe this was the only section you added - I got confused with the large chunk of text in the draft. While I think the section you added did a great job of explaining a specific type of material and how it was used, I think it would be beneficial to maybe add another section about other kinds of materials and its history instead of just one. Overall, it looks great - the references are accessible, the information is up to date, and the information is all relevant. Good work!