User:Mecstud/Emerald Fennell/Catherinefort Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mecstud


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mecstud/Emerald_Fennell?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Emerald Fennell

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is really strong, and with a few changes it will be even better! Below are the changes I would recommend making

Fennell's works examine the concepts of platonic and familial love, coping with loss, and vengeance. Promising Young Woman notably contains themes common in Emerald Fennell's work: misogyny, sexual violence against women, and the harm of the male gaze. Through the use of color schemes and soundtracks, Fennel creates a mood and tone that conveys the protagonists avenging mindset. The use of pinks and blues within the mise en scène juxtapose Cassie's [use an adjective here to describe the intentions] intentions with her "womanhood." In contrast, warm tones fill the rooms of uncomfortable situations in order to signal Cassie's discomfort in these scenarios. For the soundtrack, Emerald Fennell used all female artists except one, the composer for the final "Toxic" cover during the climax of the film. Fennel has stated that it was important to her to keep a female driven film touching on the topics of the #MeToo movement, incorporating female music that reflected her vision for the film. By highlighting the importance of the film's message, Fennell and her music supervisor were able to get Capitol records to agree to usage while complying with Promising Young Woman 's independent budget. [critics have noted that- don't make it sound like your opinion as the writer]- Although her first film, Promising Young Woman displays Fennell's style as an auteur and social comentarian.

Great job!

Mecstud response to peer review:

Thank you so much for your recommendations! It's nice to get an outside perspective since I have been reading my own work over and over. I will go in to my draft and add in these adjectives and clean up the parts you said sound opinionated. Thank you again so much, I'm really glad my paragraph made sense.