User:Med20a/Social cognitive theory/Birdbeck55 Peer Review

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(Med20a, Jtm20dc, Haleymackinnon)
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 * Social cognitive theory
 * Social cognitive theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
The additional sentences and content were well-structured remaining neutral. However, in the history section, I suggest going straight into explaining that Social Cognitive Theory was derived from the book Animal Drive rather than paraphrasing the first sentence. Additionally, in the behavioral section, it's a great idea to introduce self-efficacy early as it connects the idea with the following section. However, I would recommend removing the brief definition that follows, as it's already explained within the self-efficacy section. As it pertains to the sources, they do a great job reflecting the content, and adding an image with a model from the self-efficacy source, which explains the model, would be a great addition.