User:MedLife4/Internalized racism/Nicgrana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User: MedLife4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MedLife4/Internalized_racism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Internalized racism

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section is very good at describing the overall definition and providing examples of internalized racism. The tone and balance is great and your statement is very neutral. I think your contribution adds some important information in regards to challenges internalized racism causes for students from minority populations. This information can be tied with the stereotype threat section as well. A study conducted by Claude Steele and Joshua Aronson confirmed the presence and dramatic effect of stereotype threat in classrooms with white and black students that I think would be really beneficial to add to that section.

(a PDF of their paper should you be interested in looking over it: https://users.nber.org/~sewp/events/2005.01.14/Bios+Links/Good-rec2-Steele_&_Aronson_95.pdf)