User:Medicalendeavor/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Blueberry muffin baby

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chose to evaluate this article because it is over a focused subject that has had extensive published articles covering the topic. I am also interested in pediatrics and am interested in improving and adding to this article.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of this article opens with a sentence that summarizes what a blueberry muffin baby is. In my opinion, the beginning of the article could be more clear and concise regarding the topic. The lead does not include a description of the article's major sections. The lead section does include information that is not present in the article. For example, this sentence refers to purpura and extramedullary hematopoeisis, words that are not expanded upon in the following sections.

The content is relevant to the topic but is lacking in breadth. Content is not up-to-date. There should more content regarding the diagnosis, cause, and treatment of a blueberry muffin baby.

The article has a good tone as it presents information in a neutral point of view. There is no bias present in the article. It does not persuade the audience one way or the other. No viewpoints were misrepresented.

Sources are properly cited. However, sources are not the most current and do not cover a diverse spectrum of authors. The sources listed do not reflect the available literature on the topic. Links of cited sources do work properly.

Organization of the content is sensible. Article does not have spelling issues, but the article does have minor grammar mistakes. The articles is well-organized.

Images are captioned well and cited properly. The image does enhance further understanding of a blueberry muffin baby. The image is laid out in a visually appealing way and adheres to Wikipedia's copyright regulations.

The talk page is not very active. The last post was in 2016 in which an editor stated that external links have been edited. It is rated as a stub-class page of mid-level importance. This article is supported by the Dermatology Task Force.

Overall, the article has been poorly expanded upon and there is not a lot of information covered regarding the the article subject. The strengths of the article include the helpful picture. The article also provides a general idea of what causes a blueberry muffin baby. The article can be improved upon by expanding the breadth of sources covered and addition of further information. This includes what age group is affected, how the disease is treated, and the pathophysiology behind the disease. This article is very much underdeveloped.