User:Medicusfuturi/Galen/DR3bbarnes Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Medicusfuturi


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Medicusfuturi/Galen?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Galen

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead provided in the current version properly introduces the information that is discussed throughout the article, and is an acceptable length for the amount of information addressed. The content within the article is relevant, while the tone remains neutral throughout. Citations provided in the article are accessible and up to date; the editor's citations are accessible, reliable, and provide a great amount of information about Galen's impacts on cardiovascular system. The layout of the original article is well organized, as it focuses on his childhood, journeys, impacts in anatomy/medicine, and legacy. The images already provided are well placed, benefit the sections they are placed in, and provide accurate and concise captions. The content that plans to be added by the editor is lacking in the original article and will make a favorable contribution to pre-existing information. I believe that it would be best to read the full article and correct any mistakes made, specifically run-on sentences and grammatical errors that I noticed within some of the sections.