User:Medstud15/Adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder/Skam1279 Peer Review

General info
medstud15
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Medstud15/Adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Adult attention deficit hyperactivity disorder

Evaluate the drafted changes
- I like all of the articles you chose - they all seem to be good and informative.

- I think adding the subsection "ADHD in underrepresented communities" or even "barriers to diagnosis" would be really great. I feel like it's important to address.

- I feel like the lead is a bit long and has a lot of information that is presented later in the article.