User:Medstudent2021/Surgical smoke/Chinnerj Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Medstudent2021


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Medstudent2021/Surgical smoke


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Medstudent2021/Surgical smoke

Evaluate the drafted changes
Might want to provide wiki links for the following, or find simpler words: "ablate, cut, coagulate, desiccate, fulgurate, or vaporize tissue." I don't even know what fulgurate means lol. When you're talking about percentages, it might help to have the little reference number at the end of the sentence. Paragraphs could be expanded in some areas, and I picked up on some typos sprinkled in there. You might consider changing your first sentence because it makes it seem like the article is going to be primarily about the most common causes of surgical smoke rather than surgical smoke itself. Maybe something like, "surgical smoke is a bi-product of some surgical tools, like electrocautery, and has been shown to cause adverse health effects." That's just off of the top of my head, but idk, something along those lines since that's what you're talking about.

On the positive side- this is a very informational article on something that is extremely relevant for those in surgical fields. I think that you have a solid amount of reputable sources, and did a good job of rephrasing the information from those sources in your article. Aside from the more scientific terms that I mentioned, the article is pretty easy to read and understand. I didn't pick up on any bias; you present the info in a neutral manner. I also like your picture as well as the caption below it.