User:Meegleague/Kamares ware/Hazelsvest Peer Review

General info
Meegleague
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Meegleague/Kamares ware
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Kamares ware

Lead
The lead is mostly unchanged content-wise, but it looks like you added some citations in the first two paragraphs which is great! Could you possibly find some source(s) for the third paragraph?

The intro sentence is clear and concise, and the lead does a good job giving an overview of the topic overall.

Content
The content looks good so far! You have added some good sources, and I know you said you're not done yet so keep up the good work :)

I wonder if the article might benefit from adding a separate section on "Design and materials." The article mentions the materials/colors/designs used to create the pottery, but it is kind of just embedded throughout. It might be nice to move some of the info around and/or add some more to create its own section, since it seems like an important component of the topic.

Maybe some more info on the process of how the pottery was made?

Tone and Balance
The tone remains neutral and balanced throughout.

Sources and References
I know you are still adding sources, but the ones you have added so far seem reliable and credible.

Organization
The content is well written and organized. It is easy to read and follow, and has a nice flow.

Images and Media
There are lots of images already included in the article, so I don't think you need to add any more! The gallery looks really good.