User:Meezoya/Lust, Caution/Adambletcher Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ShannonHegedus, Meezoya


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Meezoya/Lust, Caution/Bibliography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lust, Caution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Draft is still to be created, however you have a very detailed bibliography. It is difficult to analyze the relevancy of your sources without knowing which aspect of the film you intend to write about

Sources and References

-I like the fact that your sources are all peer reviewed scholarly works

-I think you could benefit from a wider range of sources, such as web pages, film reviews, and news articles

-Your sources cover a wide time range, considering the film was released in 2007

-They also include authors and institutions from a wide range, further strengthening your article reliability

I think you have a great collection of sources, you just need to analyze and compile the information. I think your article could benefit from sources that are less scholarly and provide a more mainstream of layman view of your topic and sub topics.