User:MegMarie13/Advocates for Youth/Wentl015 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think your article is well written, has good headings/sections, and includes relevant information. The information presented seems to be neutral and unbiased. I do wonder if it would be possible to find more secondary sources as it seems that many of your sources are from the organization's website. Overall I think you've done a good job.