User:MegStern/Agriculture in The Gambia/Kwashi20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Meg Stern

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Economy of the Gambia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Economy of the Gambia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: Introduces the topic effectively, but the first sentence could be stronger and use more advanced academic language. However, the lead does not include information that isn't found in the article.

Content: Yes, the information provided is relevant to the subject matter. Although some ideas could be expanded on, there isn't any missing information. Authors could connect the agricultural sector material from lectures to fulfill the Wiki gap.

Tone and Balance: Academic language and persuasive tones could be further improved on.

Sources and References: There are a few instances where claims or information was given without properly citing the material.

Organization: Organization could use some work, specifically with regards to the economic sector.

Images and Media : Media adds to the information provided but be careful about citations.