User:Megan808/Francis Palani Sinenci/Bronsonazama Peer Review

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Megan808


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 * User:Megan808/Francis Palani Sinenci


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Aloha e Megan! Love your chosen Aloha ʻĀina, Uncle Francis is truly worthy of recognition. I do love all the details you are putting in, but in may be wise to keep it simple in the beginning with just saying his title and summarizing his work as a "Master Hale builder, and noted for his works to restore wahi kapu." It is simple and to the point. The details of his work I feel in Uncle Francisʻs case can be featured in various other sections. This will brighten up those sections of your article a lot.

Other than that great work!