User:Meganshw/Live2D/MOIN2022 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meganshw


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Meganshw/Live2D?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Live2D

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The introduction does include a good amount of details about Live2D, and it's clear to me as a reader. I noticed that you include brief introductions to its features and applications like vtubing and facerig, which I believe will be a good start points to expand. You can adds some screenshots from the software and specifically describes its feature (maybe you can use article for blender as an example?), you can also introduces some image or gif from Facerig and famous visual Youtube channel to specify how Live2D can be applied in various ways.

You can also introduces more history about Live2D, how it developed overtime and how it be recognized by developers. Also, you can introduce its release history with key changes.

Seems like the overall structure of the article is kind of messed up, so I think focus on fixing that would be critical as well.

Also, I think adding more visual elements in this article will be useful and fun since live2D is a quite visually inspiring technology.

I think it will also make your article and reference more reliable if you would be able to find article relates to Live2D on tech forum or press.