User:Meganyeh/Immigration/Isabellalunads Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * meganyeh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Meganyeh/Legal aid in the United States


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Legal aid in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead functions well although there could be more of an introduction into what pro-bono services are. Content deals with Wikipedia's equity gaps and is up to date. Content is relevant and the tone is informative. Content is not necessarily neutral because it functions to advocate for a certain group. Overall the addition would benefit the larger article.