User:Meganyeh/Legal aid in the United States/CooperR.Anthony Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meganyeh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Meganyeh/Legal_aid_in_the_United_States?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Legal aid in the United States

Evaluate the drafted changes
Again, your writing is very clear and concise in terms of what it is discussing. Each section is definitely relevant to the article you are adding to. My main comments are on the organization and integration of the content into the article. I see that you are still trying to figure out where to place your content. From reading the wiki article and where you mention putting your content, I think that the first two paragraphs you have would fit well at the end of the “Lawyer-client relationships in pro bono services” section. The two sentences you have could work at the end of the last paragraph of the wiki article section. You could even move that entire last paragraph—“Critics argue…”—to be after what you have on Trauma-informed litigation, since you end your paragraph on questions around immigration law and how lawyers make the decisions centered on the client trauma. That could flow together well.

On another note, there are no references or anything in what you have on trauma-informed litigation. Adding a few sources to back up your claims could make the paragraph a lot stronger, especially since you refer to research on a new paradigm that immigrants face.

Overall, your content is very in line with what the article is about, and I think that your additions will improve it.