User:Meghanherlitzka/Haloquadratum walsbyi/Epicfroggz Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meghanherlitzka & group members


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Meghanherlitzka/Haloquadratum_walsbyi?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Haloquadratum walsbyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Wow! Fascinating organism. Now, I don't believe you guys have made major changes to the article itself, and the draft is only references so far. But, I do like how your references have notes describing the article, which I assume will be used for guiding future drafting. Two things I will recommend are 1) shortening the lead by creating a "Discovery" section and 2) splitting up the "Description" section more (ex. adding a "Genomics" section). I recommend using the article E. coli for inspiration on possible organization. Good luck!