User:Meghanherlitzka/Haloquadratum walsbyi/Haw11967 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meghanherlitzka, Chinedu23, Ragi02, Hart Hequembourg


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)Haloquadratum walsbyi

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the sandbox just contains the reference links and descriptions, so I evaluated the article.

Lead: The lead touches on things that I believe need to be added as headers with more elaborate information. For example, it mentions the history of Haloquadratum walsbyi, but then there is not history section in the article. Content: There is little content in this article thus far. Most of it is either the history of the organism, or the genetic makeup. There needs to be more about what it does to the environment, what does it effect, etc.

Balance: There needs to be a lot more things added to this article. There is an abundance of room for more information with more sections. Right now the article is basically just the general description of this bacteria and then references.

References: They seem to be good references with good sourcing.

Images: Total of three images currently. I like that the three pictures are different in what they represent.

In General: The grammar, spelling, and sequencing of the sentences makes sense and flows to me. I just think since their is only the introduction and description section, the paragraphs are jumpy and not full of information. It is easy to read and could be a well written article with the addition of structure and content.