User:Meghanwu/High performance thin layer chromatography/Bird flock Peer Review

General info
Meghanwu and Gracelybear
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Meghanwu/High performance thin layer chromatography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * High-performance thin-layer chromatography

Evaluate the drafted changes
Pros:

-neutral article

-lead introduction is a great overview of what this article is about.

-lots of sources, well researched.

-very well structured. If I wanted to reread a specific topic, I know exactly where to go.

Cons:

-could add an image of the instruments like the Linomat 5-The three modes explanation is a bit underdeveloped. I could see each mode getting a separate section, but its your call if they warrant that much.

-Examples of instrumentation section feels underdeveloped. Where you talk about notable HPTLC instruments in the section before, I would put that paragraph into the examples of instrumentation to focus the HPTLC methodology section more and develop the examples of application section.

-I would find a source for when you talk about the PRSIMA model.

Overall: Well done article that actually taught me stuff. As someone who doesn't think about TLC, I could read this article just fine.