User:Meghanwu/High performance thin layer chromatography/Toady03 Peer Review

General info
High performance thin layer chromatography (Meghanwu, Gracelybear)
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Meghanwu/High performance thin layer chromatography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * High-performance thin-layer chromatography
 * High-performance thin-layer chromatography

Evaluate the drafted changes
Very detailed and relevant additions! The original article is very barren and the new subsections make a great addition.

Tone is neutral.

Good sources.

Many sentences can be more concise using Brogan methods. For example, in the intro:

"This analytical technique is rooted in TLC but incorporates enhancements aimed at enhancing compound resolution and enabling their quantitative analysis." can be cut down to :

"This TLC-based analytical technique enhances compound resolution for quantitative analysis."

Are there plans to add images? They may help since this is a very detailed article. For example, a flow chart would be nice for the HPTLC Methodology section.

The following sentence feels out of place since you're referring to one specific study (bias): Le Roux's research team assessed HPTLC for determining salbutamol serum levels in clinical trials and concluded that it is a suitable method for analyzing serum samples.

Some abbreviations are confusing since the unabbreviated names weren't mentioned (PRISMA, CAMAG, etc.)