User:Megluther/Breanne McGhee/Leeperhb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Meg Luther


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Megluther/Breanne_McGhee?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article does well on being neutral and concise. There is a good amount of writing without the addition of extraneous details. The sources seem reliable and relevant. There are enough sources to cover a broad range of her topic. Images, like a portrait, may be useful in this article. You could add to some sections, but this may be easiest to do once you have spoken with your person.