User:Megmcquillen/Social impact of the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States/Rcd67 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Megmcquillen


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social impact of the COVID-19 pandemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft was very good at presenting the issue in a near neutral manner. I think it could be helpful if there was more mention about the "motivations" behind the racial attacks and how these are largely unsubstantiated. You may have a plan already but I wasnt sure if this was going to be a whole new section in the larger article or fall into a section that was already present. Either way I would make sure that any lead in paragraphs have some reference to this new material.