User:Megreed7/Brown spider monkey/Jjm2121 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Megreed7


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Megreed7/Brown_spider_monkey?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Brown spider monkey

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like what you have changed, I would hyperlink inter-Andean if there is a link for it. One edit I suggest on this article in general is to change the wording in this phrase, it does not feel professional...

"The brown spider monkey has a whitish belly and patch on the forehead, and – highly unusual among spider monkeys – its eyes can be pale blue."

maybe change it to...

"The brown spider monkey has a whitish belly and patch on its forehead. On occasion brown spider monkeys have been known to have pale blue eyes which is highly unusual among spider monkeys."