User:Megreed7/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(58th Venice Biennale)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(I chose to evaluate this article because I have personally been to the Biennale exhibit when I was in Venice. This topic is important to me because the Biennale does a great job at incorporating work from artists all over the world, and also incorporates a lot of social and political pieces to raise awareness.)

Evaluate the article
(I believe that the overall article was well-written and very concise. However, I feel like it lacked detail on some of the pieces that were represented in the 58th Venice Biennale. There have been many editors to this page and a lot of them included a lot of American contributions such as the references to Hilary Clinton's email scandal. I also believe that this article should have a little more detail on some of the international artists that contributed and some of the awareness they were trying to promote with their pieces. Only a few pieces were mentioned throughout this wikipedia page. I think that the grammar and language of this article was good but can also be improved. There weren't too many images throughout the page and I feel as though some images of the art may help the readers understand the importance and significance of it. )