User:Megvdb4/Dr. Amanda Bradford/Rose2720 Peer Review

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Lead
Don't need the comma in the first sentence. Second sentence replace first comma with a period to split the sentence. Remove commas in last sentence too as it makes sense without them. Wikipedia seems to recommend adding a brief description of the main sections in the article here at the introduction. It is a concise introduction.

Content
Content is pretty solid, especially the research side. Section on professional affiliations is not filled in yet.

Tone and Balance
Seems like a neutral article to me and covers her career well.

Sources and References
Lots of references. References 13, 14 ad 16 have an error. Other links work.

Organization
In the box "marine ecologist" should be changed to "marine ecology" since it is referring to the field. And the thesis portion I am confused about, was her thesis published in 2011? Can you insert the title or topic in there?

Under graduate education: "his is a serious issue for the critically endangered species as it can affected whether..." change affected to affect. Also sentence "identification of the gray whale population and publish a paper on how to identify calves..." Change publish to published.

Under Pacific Islands Fisheries Science Center Section: "False killer whales are know for depredation" change know to known.

Organization of article itself is good.

Images and Media
Currently no images used. If possible add one before publishing officially.

New Article
Has a long list of notable awards so that should make this article pass.

Overall
Great article. If possible maybe add some more about her early life in the introduction or why she chose science and marine ecology. Personally I would capitalize all words in the headers and subheadings. Everything else looks great beyond the couple grammar things mentioned and the section on professional affiliations.