User:Mehvishtahseen/sandbox

"Article Evaluation"
I am evaluating the Article Technology

Evaluating Content
At the start of the article in Pre-historical historical section is needed some changes. If the article is about technology this section should not explain about anything else but how some tasks that were performed that we use technology for in modern days. The second issue is with the setting of the paragraphs of the article. First the writer should have explain about the beginning of the technology, funding, its uses, more examples, and at the end it's advantages and disadvantages were needed to be written.

Evaluating Tone
I think the article is neutral. I did not find any claims that appears biased to any group. The viewpoint that are over represented are that how technology is funded and used.

Evaluating Sources
After checking few of the citation I can say that the links provided works and do support the claims in to the article. Most of the material for this article has been taken from books which is consider as reliable resource.

Checking the talk page
There was no conversation going on the talk page of the article. Upon the quality scale this article was rated as start-class.

Upon importance scale this article was rated as high importance. This article is part of wiki project anthropology and sociology.

"Notes"
Editing to the article technology and society.

Adding the same citations to the article and to the reference section below.

Assignment 5 : References
Citation Added to the Article:

Assignment 6:
500+ words paragraph have been added to the article.

"Peer review Assignment 7 completed":
"Mehvish peer reviewed Anam's article".

"Mehvish peer reviewed Sheeba's article".

"Assignment 9 completed":
The suggestions made for my article were helpful because I think the same too that the article I choose is good according to how it describe about the past and present relationship of the technology and society. I also agree that the more sources with the reliable materials are used the more reader of my article will get information which is the true purpose of the essay.

Assignment 11:
A picture has been added to the article.

Assignment 13:
made changes to the the article to improve my work.

Assignment 14:
Reviewed the requirements for paper and made changes accordingly.

Assignment 15:
After making some change submitted my final article to the blackboard for grading.