User:Meismi/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Cyberpunk (role-playing game)

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I really enjoy the cyberpunk genre as a whole, and thought that something in that vein would be fun to evaluate. it seems really well put together.

Evaluate the article
lead


 * the lead is concise and to the point explaining what cyberpunk( the role playing game) is
 * does not include a description of the different section in the article

content


 * on topic
 * its up to date to my knowledge
 * everything in the article directly relates to cyberpunk(TTRPG) or media based off of it
 * not sure if this counts as covering an equity gap, but cyberpunk(TTRPG) is made by a black man

tone


 * the article seems neutral
 * there is nothing that stands out as biased
 * no attempts at persuasion
 * does not seem like any viewpoints are over or under represented

sources:


 * the facts seem to line up with reputable sources
 * most of the sources are reviews of the game and interviews with the games creator
 * the sources are current all of them have been accessed in 2020 or sooner
 * I couldn't find better sources, as people don't typically write peer reviewed articles on games
 * the links work

organization and writing quality,


 * it seems well written and I didn't find any spelling errors
 * thangs are stated concisely going into detail when necessary
 * page layout and sections were intuitive and made sense
 * most relevant stuff at the top of the page less relevant stuff at the bottom ie. game mechanics come before  related media. one exception is i would like the reception section to be above the reacted media section

images and media


 * it has 3 images one of Mike Pondsmith, the games creator, one of the gamebooks front cover and one of a map showing where the game is set
 * I'd like to see more images of media from the game

talk page


 * lots of good conversation but the talk page seems a bit dead the most recent post is from 2021
 * lots of talk about reformatting
 * is in the science fiction and roleplaying games wiki projects

overall impressions:


 * fairly solid article it is concise and to the point while going into detail when necessary
 * its strengths are its well formatted, and does a great job breaking down the intricacies of the game
 * its weaknesses, it lacks any of the lore from the games id love to see some explanation of what the game is like to play I'd also like to see more photos of the game itself there is a lot of really good are in the books
 * I'd say the article is 99% of the way there it has a b rating and I think with a few tweaks here and there it could easily get an A