User:Mel6930/Judge Bernadette D'Souza/Lucysteven3 Peer Review

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This is a really strong article that highlights and summarizes, and also delves into specifics that are important to her story.

The photos throughout the article are helpful and add to the informative nature of the article.

The lead is concise, neutral and informative.

The early life and education portion is really robust and well-researched. The information about what inspired D'Souza to pursue her law degree was especially notable and meaningful to her story. The particular years given regarding citizenship, graduation, etc. are chronological and provide a good amount of specificity.

I like the way you broke out the categories into early legal career, civil district court service, and the subheadings below civil district court service. The article is easy to navigate and digest as a result of this structure.

The entire article is neutral, concise, and informative.

Perhaps add more data under the "key cases" section.

The membership and associations section is rich and lengthy. It's helpful that you split it up between current and past memberships.

Really great structure, tone, categories and information.