User:Melamin22/History of Sudan/Mwasay Peer Review

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Mustafa
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Evaluate the drafted changes
"One of the longest civil wars, a 22 year conflict between Sudan and South Sudan ended peacefully after more than 2 million deaths. "

His changes that he made took the part of how long the conflict was and he talked about how there was 2 billion deaths, all the deaths that occurred was not labeled in the actual article so it does make a good contribution and it is complete as well, and whatever needed