User:Melancosmic/Manchester State Park (Washington)/TKUW Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Melancosmic )


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AMelancosmic%2FManchester_State_Park_%28Washington%29%2FBibliography&type=revision&diff=1067329528&oldid=1066767924
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Manchester State Park (Washington)
 * Manchester State Park (Washington)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

It looks like there is barely anything on this topic so thank you for taking the time to make it better. I see that you added the parks website as a source which I think is smart since it has direct connection. I don't know if what I see is right but I think you deleted what already excited (If i'm not wrong) and i'm assuming you're going to start it from scratch. If that's the case that would be fantastic. Couple things I would consider while working on this topic is:

-How it was found

-Why is it named Manchester State Park

-How long it has been there

-Is It private or public park

Those are the things I would look into if I am search for a park on wikipedia. I am sure you're already thinking about those questions but I hope it will help.