User:Melani Tonin/Evaluate an Article

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I chose this article

Pierce the Veil - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
Why did I choose it? The reason is simple, I love them and they are my precious little band boys and they make me happy. There is no other reason besides that.

Evaluate the article
The Lead: I think that the introduction i swell written, plus they talk about Mike and Vic's previous band, which surprisingly not a lot of people who listen to their music know about.

Content: I think the author(s) did a decent job. They talked about each album that the boys had released and covered it pretty thoroughly and even talked about their musical style for some people who may not know what their music is like. It is pretty up to date, referencing to the mention on August 24, 2020 that Mike had not been involved with the band as of 2017. The author also mentioned their awards and nominations.

Tone and Balance: it the tone did not sound biased in my opinion. It came of to me as rather neutral. All that they did was discuss the members and the band history.

Sources: I feel that it was well sourced and some the links do work.

Organization and Writing Quality: The way in which the information was present had a nice flow in my opinion and I did not notice may mistakes, although that could be because I am the queen of grammatical errorz myself (see what I did there)?

Images and Media: The pictures captured the band pretty well, although there was only two. One of the pictures had a link attached to it so, I feel like since they referenced the pictures original origin that it should be fine. Plus, I do not see anything by wiki that would prompt me to think otherwise.

Talk Page Discussion: The conversation made me snicker. People are going back and forth on what genre of music they are. I would say posthardcore/ metalcore but it's funny to see people calling them progressive rock plus someone getting upset because someone else keeps editing the article. It is start class.

Overall Impression: I think it was fine, people just need to keep it up to date since their musical career is still on-going. It's main strength was that it was about the boys.