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LSU
LSU's mascot is Mike the tiger.

copyediting assignment
I would edit this article http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Animal_Crackers_(TV_series). I immediately noticed grammatical errors and problems with sentence structure throughout the article. I would fix these errors and add citations. Melanie3564 (talk) 01:07, 9 February 2015 (UTC)Melanie


 * Good choice. Are you planning to use the article for both assignments? You certainly can. Go ahead and do some copyediting first to get the first assignment out of the way. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:46, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 2
I would add sources to this article, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drew_Brees. My sources include: 1. Murphy, A. (2014). PAIN STAKING. Sports Illustrated, 121(3), 34-39. Retrieved from: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=9&sid=e20f03bb-22da-4ac8-8b15-d51dfa1be04b%40sessionmgr4001&hid=4102&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#db=s3h&AN=97174552

2. Jenkins, L. (2010). For You, New Orleans. Sports Illustrated, 112(7), 30-41. Retrieved from: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=34&sid=e20f03bb-22da-4ac8-8b15-d51dfa1be04b%40sessionmgr4001&hid=4102&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#db=s3h&AN=48076924

3. Layden, T. (2010). SPORTSMAN OF THE YEAR DREW BREES. Sports Illustrated, 113(21), 56-67. Retrieved from: http://eds.b.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?sid=1cca2f0b-908e-441c-92c3-a9cb789357a8%40sessionmgr110&vid=19&hid=104&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#db=s3h&AN=55559667

4. Newman, E. (2006). Drew Brees. Sports Illustrated, 105(10), 34-35. Retrieved from: http://eds.a.ebscohost.com.libezp.lib.lsu.edu/eds/detail/detail?vid=15&sid=e20f03bb-22da-4ac8-8b15-d51dfa1be04b%40sessionmgr4001&hid=4102&bdata=JnNpdGU9ZWRzLWxpdmUmc2NvcGU9c2l0ZQ%3d%3d#db=s3h&AN=22256409


 * Added sources however they are not displaying correctly-- need to ask/get help on how to fix.

Assignment 3
Article needed new lead section: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Tropics_(band)

In 1964 in Tampa, Florida, the band, The Tropics, emerged by Buddy Pendergrass along with Wayne Guida, Ronnie Ferer, and Spencer Hinkle. Not long after, the Tropics began to perform all over Florida and the Southeastern US where they toured alongside The Who, The Young Rascals, Herman's Hermits, and Heinz Heinz & Dad. In 1996 they won the International Battle of the Bands, signed a recording contract with Columbia Records, and quickly became the top Pop Rock-band in the Southeastern.