User:Melanieeeedawson/Lipstick feminism/Wolfpack3810 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Melanieeeedawson


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Melanieeeedawson/Lipstick_feminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Lipstick feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The first thing that did catch my eye when just doing a brief look over of the structure of the article was the images that have been added. I find this a very big edit and it makes the actual page look a lot more professional as there were not many pictures on the original article. Also, the major addition to the language section progresses the article in a very good way. A couple of recommendations I do have though is adding more new sections like you did with "lipstick feminism in media." I feel like it just adds a better understanding to the whole topic for readers that do come across it. My last recommendation is to just keep expanding on the sections that you already have but that should not be hard as this draft shows major progress and is on the right path to becoming a major contribution to Wikipedia.