User:Melaninari/Graphic communication/GarrisonCalmerDighton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Melaninari


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Melaninari/Graphic_communication?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Graphic communication

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your addition to this article is helpful.

Your bibliography is very in depth and adds a lot of sources to the article. However most of the articles are older than ten years old and could probably be updated with more current sources.

I would also suggest to remove the as the name suggests from the intro. That phrasing comes off as non neutral in tone.