User:Melikajvn/Nuclear magnetic resonance spectroscopy/Sunshine8899 Peer Review

It seems like you have picked a good topic. However, your sandbox was hard to follow. Consider adding the subtitle or mentioning which part from the original wiki page you edited. Please use the citation for your work.

I would assume that your first paragraph is a summary of the Biomolecular NMR spectroscopy part. But it seems like everything is already mentioned on the original Wiki page.

In your second paragraph: It's good to have the equation on J-coupling and the change in peak height, but I don't get why you mention the change in peak height. Consider expanding your rationale on this part.

Then, you started talking about the orientations of R groups on the aromatic ring which is good. It's all good that you have some image drafts on this part. Keep up your good work and consider using ChemDraw or other virtual tools to make your images better.

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