User:Melisa Nur Temiz/Appalachian music/Kyleruss311 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Melisa Nur Temiz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Melisa Nur Temiz/Appalachian music - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Appalachian music - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

To start things off I believe that the user uses the word "New World Ballad" too much in the beginning of the article. Using other words or nouns could lead to less repetition in the article. The user does a very good job using mature vocabulary to describe things. For someone who does not know much about music in Appalachia, the article could be hard to follow; however I think anyone with anyone background knowledge of music in Appalachia would find this article very credible. Overall, I believe that this article is very credible and I would use this article as credible research to understand music in Appalchia.