User:Melissa.guerrero/Women's Museum of California/Juliaapatino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Melissa.guerrero


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Melissa.guerrero
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Women's Museum of California

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the article does very well. Melissa added a section regarding the film festival. The information that was out in was very well put together and gave a detailed description to understand this topic more. One thing that I would change is the last sentence of your edit, "The film festival includes a panel consisting of activists and filmmakers to discuss the lack of representation and equality of women's roles in the film industry" that way, the sentence is more fluent. Other than that minor change, I think the edits were very well thought through and helped me understand the film festival better.