User:MellowEl98/Lamiales/Dylanc9918 Peer Review

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User:MellowEl98


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 * User:MellowEl98/Lamiales


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Introduction

I really like the additions you made here, Noticed you add that is 25 families now which is a good update keeps it current. I wonder if it would be better to just list some families instead of all 25, but the way you have it here also makes it nice for people to easily learn more about the families if they care to.

Description

once again I really like the additions you made here and really flushed out the details of the flower, stem, etc. I think the wording of this sentence "Most families in the order Lamiales have five stamen but are reduced to two or four." could be changed a little bit to be a little more clear. I understand what it is saying but I think in its current form its just a tad bit unclear. Everything else looks great

Body

I think the additions of habitat, carnivore plant, parasitic plant, and uses are really interesting and bring a little more life to the article and this plants interesting aspects.

The uses section especially is super informative and I am surprised that it didn't exist before.

Overall I think you did a great job with your additions, everything seems grammatically correct and your additions all have good peer-reviewed citations behind them. Great job!