User:Melodymhl/Serial crime/ThoomBOY Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Melodymhl)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Melodymhl/Serial_crime?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Serial crime

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Your draft looks great. I don't really have anything for you. Your sources are on point, and your paragraphs make sense and are very informative. I am sorry I couldn't be more helpful. Great work!!!