User:Memelord7/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
12th Fail

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I decided to check the Wikipedia page for the movie "12th Fail" because it's been getting a lot of attention lately and is even listed in the Top 25 Report. I was also intrigued by the fact that it's linked to two WikiProjects, one focusing on Indian films and the other on India in general (although it's labeled as "Low Importance" in the latter). This connection implies that people are actively working together to improve information about Indian movies, and that caught my interest.

Lead Section:
The introduction at the beginning of the article is well done. It gives a quick and clear picture of the movie "12th Fail," talking about its director (Vidhu Vinod Chopra), the storyline focusing on overcoming poverty, and the background of the film. This section is helpful for anyone looking to get a fast overview of what the movie is about.

Plot:
The story section is mostly good, but there are parts that need more details. The ending part, where it talks about the interview round, is a bit unclear. To make it better, we should add more information about how Manoj tried and what happened in each attempt. Explaining the examination process and his progress during each attempt would make the story more understandable.

Updating:
Because "12th Fail" is a new movie and it's winning awards, we need to keep the article up to date. The part about the awards should be regularly updated to show the ongoing success of the film.

Importance of the Movie: "12th Fail" is an important movie because it talks about the struggle to escape poverty, both in and out of India. It highlights the main character, Manoj Kumar Sharma's hard work, and dedication to becoming successful. To improve the article, we can add more details about these important themes to help readers understand the movie's impact on society and culture.

Sections Needing Improvement:
Some crucial sections, like Production, Development, Casting, and Filming, need more information to make the article complete. Adding more details about how the movie was made will give readers a fuller picture. Also, the article lacks images and media, which are important for readers to connect with the content. Adding properly captioned images following copyright rules will make the article more engaging.

Conclusion:
To sum it up, the "12th Fail" Wikipedia article has strong points, especially in the introduction and coverage of the plot. But to make it better, we need to provide more context in the story section, keep the awards updated, and add more details about the production process. The movie's importance in addressing social issues makes it a topic worth exploring thoroughly. Improving these areas will make the article more valuable and interesting for a wide audience.