User:Menacing djungelskog/Short-tailed chinchilla/Averebs51 Peer Review

General info

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 * menacing djungleskog

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Menacing djungelskog/Short-tailed chinchilla
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Short-tailed chinchilla

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Based on your edits to the article, I think adding proper grammar, punctuation, and rearranging words that needed to be removed or added was very smart. I think doing this sets up the article to make it sound more professional before adding more to the existing article.

One thing that stood out to be most was your addition of the header "Ecology", I think this information is very vital information that was needed to be added and the detail you used was extraordinary. Another good addition you made was the header "Behavior" which was most definitely needed and I think adding onto the existing information under this heading was a great edit as well.

I think your use of organization in the sandbox is very though out and well structured. I do question whether or not you will add anything to the "lead" section in the article. This section is the most detailed part of an article because it holds the overview of the animal without going into the specifics like ecology, taxonomy, or conservation.

Lastly, I suggest adding the title of the resource into your cited page. I think it was very smart to obtain all of this added information from one resource. The only suggestion would be to make sure you are citing all information within the resource, for example the title of the website, journal, book, etc.

I am not sure if you planned on doing this but I suggest to add better pictures of the Short-tailed chinchilla. Even though, the pictures are adorable I do think it would be better to have a picture that does not have the chinchilla scrunched up. Possibly find a picture that has the full body and a minimal background.

Overall, I think you did a great job editing the article thus far and I am very excited to see what else you contribute to it!