User:Mensk123/Exploitation of women in mass media/Maraa09 Peer Review

Peer review-
The article talks about how women are used in mass media to make the mass media more appealing to the outside world. In what the article terms as exploitation, the article points out that women in these mass media outlets as objects of sex and as a way of setting a beauty standard that all other females should reflect. The article explains this exploitation of women in various avenues of life where attention is always needed. The multiple channels, according to the paper, is in films, music, advertising, music videos, modeling, and pornography, and even in social media.

Looking at this article, though it raises a pertinent issue in our society today, various aspects can still be included to make it better. One way that I can make it better is by adding how the mass media can address this issue of women's exploitation. One significant way is by being sensitive to gender. Through this method, more men will equally be part of the mass media, and therefore, there will be divided attention. However, I believe that the article is somewhat biased considering how it handles this issue of women in the media. It is important to note that not just women who face exploitation. Men also face exploitation since most men in these mass media, the ones who are attractive, and they also are used as standards. Due to this, by removing the biasness, the article can become better since it will have handled the two sides of the issue. This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.