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=Proposed edits to Wikipedia's Extradition article for ENG1100=
 * 1) I suggest that the auther of the article should add in the countries that are not included in the current extradition treaty. A few counties that should be added to the list of countries without are: Kazakhstan, croatia, Dubai, Bhutan, to name a few.
 * 2) Punctuation
 * 3) More references
 * 4) Gramatical errors

Reading List

 * 1) Extradition
 * 2) Criminal procedures of Extradition
 * 3) International Extradition And Related Matters
 * 4) The 5 Best Countries With No Extradition
 * 5) Nomad capitlist

Original
Original:Even though the United States has an extradition treaty with Japan, most extraditions are not successful due to Japan’s domestic laws not their international laws they have established. In order for the United States to be successful, they must present their case for extradition to the Japanese National. However, certain evidence is barred from being in these proceedings such as the use of confessions, searches or electronic surveillance. In most cases involving international drug trafficking, this is the bulk of the evidence gathered in the investigation on a suspect for a drug-related charge. Therefore, this usually hinders the United States from moving forward with the extradition of a criminal.[15]

Revised
Sudgested changes: The article fails to mention certian cases that do not fit into the "normal" extradition process, such as is the case with japan. In the revised article I added information about how a extradition is diffrent in japan and its steps. Revised: Even though the United States has an extradition treaty with Japan, most extraditions are not successful due to Japan’s domestic laws not their international laws they have established. In order for the United States to be successful, they must present their case for extradition to the Japanese Minister of foregin affairs.Who will then review the requset of extradition. In this stange the Minister of Foregin Affairs will make sure that it fits their requirements for extradition, as they have difrent standards.Once request is approved or denied it is then Forward it to the Minister of Justice. However, certain evidence is barred from being in these proceedings such as the use of confessions, searches or electronic surveillance. In most cases involving international drug trafficking, this is the bulk of the evidence gathered in the investigation on a suspect for a drug-related charge. Therefore, this usually hinders the United States from moving forward with the extradition of a criminal.[15]

Original Contribution
The article fails to mention certian cases that do not fit into the "normal" extradition process, such as is the case with japan.