User:Meowmelon/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Symptoms of COVID-19

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it seemed interesting and relevant, and I noticed it was a class C article and may need some editing.

Evaluate the article
Lead section - The intro sentence gives a good overview of the topic, but the lead paragraph and section seems a little repetitive and could be more concise.

Content - The content is relevant and covers the main points of the topic. Some information could be updated or added. For example, more variants could be added or more details about the symptomatic differences in different age groups.

Tone and Balance - The tone seems neutral, and not persuasive in any way.

Sources and References - Most statements are cited properly, but there are couple places noted where a medical citation or non-primary source is needed. In general, it appears that most sources are good, peer reviewed journal articles, written by medical or scientific professionals. However, there are at least a few (e.g. source #34) that are news articles or websites.

Organization and Writing Quality - The article does have sections and subsections, but it could probably be organized better, and have better structural flow to it. By skimming through it I found one minor grammatical error, but no other obvious spelling or grammatical errors.

Images and Media - There are a few photos and diagrams that are helpful and complementary to the article. However, there are two pictures that give an overview of symptoms that are similar - probably only one of the pictures is necessary, not both.

Talk page discussion - There is quite a bit of discussion in the talk page about edits that could be made. The article is rated a class-C and is part of three different WikiProjects.

Overall impressions - In general, this article has good information in a range of areas about the topic and has a general structure to it. However, it feels incomplete and needs some more editing. More information could be added, and it could be organized better.