User:Mer0814/Chironomidae/LHzoology Peer Review

General info
Mer0814
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mer0814/Chironomidae
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * May want to make the lead/first body paragraph more concise. While it covers a lot of information, it doesn’t yet provide a clear description as to what the Chironomidae family is (general appearance, ancestry/relatives, etc). It might flow better if some of the details, such as the behavior diversity, are addressed later in the article or in different sections. Essentially, focus on drawing the reader in with a non-complicated, straight to the point introduction (start with the basics, what is known)
 * Sources might need to be linked more in first section (?)
 * Proper grammar
 * Variety of references
 * Images might help the reader better visualize the species
 * Overall looks really good! Mostly just focus on the lead and possibly reorganizing some of the information