User:Mercedesgeorge/Pain management/Rslindse Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MercedesGeorge


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mercedesgeorge/Pain_management?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pain management

Evaluate the drafted changes
While the lead section has not been recently updated, there looks to be progress in that area. A suggestion would be to add a an introductory sentence and an overview of what will be discussed, so that readers can know what the article entails. I also have to add a lead section to my own article, because it is missing.

The content added to the article appears to be relevant to the topic of discussion. When making lead section, making it concise is a good goal.

The references added to the article are very helpful. I believe that the introduced topic of alternative and herbal ways of managing pain offers a more broad perspective to the article.