User:Mereheterotroph/Aphanothece/Bdb.baker Peer Review

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EdgarCorrale0619, Katiemeow2, AshlyLily, Rockwithagun
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Mereheterotroph/Aphanothece
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead: I enjoyed the breakdown of the Greek words. The sentence "This genera is cosmopolitan, found in soils, thermal springs and in benthic, freshwater, marine, hypersaline, and terrestrial environments if enough moisture is present." is a little difficult to follow. I might split it into a few different sentences or adjust where you have the "ands" to make it a little easier to follow. It looks like pretty much everything brought up in the lead is addressed later in the article.
 * Content: All content is relevant to the topic. ::Organization: I might go in and check how to cite sources on wiki. I'm assuming the random numbers throughout the article correlate to references, but only one is listed. ::Tone: The tone is neutral and the information presented is objective. Overall a great article one the grammar is fixed and information cited correctly.